You look into my eyes
And break down the wall
Staring into my soul
Til it crumbles and falls
You look inside
And see what's real
Exploring every piece
Of what I feel
I look into your eyes
And see my past
Understanding the hurt
That you must keep masked
You've experienced the pain
That I've been through
My heart cries
Inside of you
We live through each other
Even if we're apart
Living as one,
With a single beating heart
You know all my signals
From happy to sad
Like how I shake my foot
When I'm really mad
Or when I am quiet
And look away
You know "nothing"
Means "I'm not okay"
You breathe through me
Filling my lungs with air
Two bodies
With one soul to share
I had no idea it was possible
To feel so connected
It came into my life
So unexpected
It feels so empowering
Knowing someone can relate
A feeling so strong
It must be fate
You and I
Are destined to be
You were made
To complete me
...
(I Love You)
A contest entry
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1750 points, ended April 14, 159 entries
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Comments
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Though this does have a lot of cliché lines in it, I felt it worked the way you wrote it, and the rhymes weren't too bad. A nice poem that you have written here.
-Nam
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this is a beautiful poem. you did a wonderful job writing this



