Will you see that we ask not for ones heart
but the time to feel the silence, the calmness between each beat.
That time which last but for a second
While lasting for an eternity. If you let it.
We share this so we can know what is missing,
between us. For us.
While sitting so close physically yet far in our minds.
Wondering will the past save us from our future
or defeat our chance of reconciliation
Twisted with this memory
we wonder, hopefully and patiently
While we embrace -
the emptiness
do you feel it sometimes?
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Yes sweetness....
I too had felt this tainted embrace before. I loved ur rythm in this piece, always and only you can pen something that goes down like brown liquor
Great job on this, really!
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Ah! you have refreshed an old memory with these words...I am sure we all have felt empitness at some point in life....this is a deep, emotional, vividly heartfelt write...........excellent poem.....Ma
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I have been there and experienced that feeling, this is how I felt as I tried to save my relationship. Powerful sad emotional write you have penned here Lovable.
Good to see you writing again
Love ~sweetness~
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