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An ode to me.

This is an ode for me

written on the back of

a marriage certificate

which is now void.

The verses are repeaditive...

Promise, promise and promise

errased over and over again

on every line that led to the end.

That tearful ink everlasting

blots out your name

with the words...

I will be me again.

 

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  • Judith Chandler
    April 27

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    It's pretty sad, almost made me cry, but the last line is a declaration of independance and hope.

    A beautiful write. Congrats on winning bronze.


  • Hope Angel silver member
    April 26
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    Aww wow Thanks for entering


  • Rose Angel gold member
    March 22

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    Beautifully penned, so real to some of us that have been there or will be there perhaps in the future..."written on the back of a marriage certificate which is null and void" "that tearful ink that now blots out your name with the words saying I will be me again" Poignant, powerful, and moving write... penning...


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    March 16

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    I'm wishing all the best for you. Loves ya, xx Cyn


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    March 15
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    Love
    Juls


  • Cannonsfire
    March 14
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    C


  • Pure Thought silver member
    March 14

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    I have always like the you I have come to know and will enjoy getting to know the you, you used to be.
    LOve, Buddy

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