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Angel I need you

Screaming from the depths
Crying within the shadows

Cold, icy tendrils reach out
and try to take me away

Running in the endless dark
I call out your name

Where are you ?
I need you , Angel

The razorblades flying at me
slicing my skin, Bleeding my life.

The Monster at my heels
not giving up the chase.

He tells me I am his
and he will Find me..

Angel! wishing to find your arms
Your wings to enfold me

To Take me out of this abyss
Angel I can't Find you...

Stumbling to the ground
The Monster over takes me

Screaming out in Sheer Terror
His Hands Fly to my throat

Trying to choke the life from..
You are mine and Not even your Angel will Save you!

My mind fills with Blackness
the last words on my lips...

Angel.. I need .. you..

Bolting up feverish from the nightmare
Gasping for air Tears fall

As I feel arms wrap around me
and a Voice whispering softly

I am Here , My love..
Cradled in his Arms

Enfolded evermore in Angel's Wings..



Author notes

I wrote this one about a dream I had last night.. I wish I really did wake up and Have Angel wrap me in his arms and tell me that.. but Angel's Wings were there..

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  • This dream continues to haunt you I think...the Monster will not harm you as I know his identity and he shall have to go through me first.


  • Darc Raven
    March 16

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    Your angel will always ALWAYS have his wings around you, my promise to you as it has been from the start. and one day, you will have my arms along with it... one day.



    ~Your Darc Angel~


  • Karayan
    March 15
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    lovely, and sorrowfilled... so much pain...
    I am here for you anytime you need to talk hun.

  • Great imagery and feel. You give a good sense of the loss at the begining, and the fear in the middle.
    And the ending is warm and beautiful in its embrace.

    Lovely write
    If you find the angel...see if he has a cute brother


  • PaleRoseAngel
    March 14
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    Me too, Rhia....Amazing Write

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