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Window.

Missing image

Living on the inside of out

is where I want to be.

I see a tree with too

many branches  to follow,

not knowing which one

leads to my roots...

 

I touch the sky

with wishful glances

hoping for a livatation

to navigate the way

but these twigs surpress

and tighten thier grip on me

pushing me to the wall.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • CaliOkie silver member
    March 18
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    Great imagery. Wonderful take on the prompt. Very well done.

    Garrison


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    March 15

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    Brilliant Artistry...

    That's the picture of me, as well - levitation by strangulation - thank you for your profound thoughts on the image, you have certainly captured the prompt like no others have. I admire your muse's sensitive, yet surreal imagination. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest!!


  • Pure Thought silver member
    March 14
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    Such a touching write, I feel it too.


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    March 14
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    Great penning here dear friend, good luck Slan Chez