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invisible longing

each morning
the scenario plays out
like some dreadful sitcom

the brilliant witty cygnet
overshadowed by insipid
blondes with blue eyes
and boyish hips

while you
the object of my desire
smiles and flirts
with the most inane of them

and i
forced into the corner
of the elevator am
rendered invisible

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  • XxMoonLiteAngelxX
    March 14

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    This is a very good poem. I like the words you put into here and the emotion. xD
    Thanks for entering and Good Luck