She was long and she was slender
And she loved beyond compare
Her body was as soft as finest silk
Of that I was well aware
She was every Master's dream
Her every step was ordered
Like a very well oiled machine
She'd come when'er I called her
And obeyed my hearts command
She would look at me with sultry eyes
I would surely understand
She bowed down purring at my feet
I knew what she was thinking
Her needs she knew I'd meet
Later on at the end of day
She would climb up on my lap
Then I'd hold her tightly to my breast
And gently stroke her tummy
Our eyes would meet
And I'd tell her she's the best
(Purrrr - Purrrr - Purrrr )
Author notes
My cat Misha - shes a good mouser too - lol - misha means - (shes) mousing
A contest entry
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Apologies - maybe you read the rules wrong - this one is about sex as opposed to love.
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Sorry -
But sex is such a common occurance - probably happens a billion times a day on planent Earth - to write about is almost like writing about eating or breathing - sex is a most beautiful (personal) gift that was given to mankind and needs to be experienced. Putting it on paper does not and will never even come close to the real thing - Bless God - Joe - dobar dan --------------------------------------------- love -
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It is a lovely poem with the subject matter as it is - that is very clear - and so I'm not criticising it in itself - it just has no connection to the contest, that was my only criticism.
Thank you anyway though.
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awww there is nothing like that from the love of a kitty cat
I adore this and thank you so much for taking the time to enter our contest and good luck to you
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Hey - Is That A Squirrel in that pic ?
Thanks for the comments and applause - now back to the squirrel - they robbed every last single walnut of my big spreading tree - lol - yes Misha is like a puppy dog - wherever I go on the farm she comes along - Bless God Lena - Joe - dobar dan --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- hugs
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A wonderful write and a wonderful cat. This emphasized the sensual aspects of feline Misha in a very appealing way.
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Hi Judi - Now for the gold ehhh - lol
She follows me around like a puppy dog - lol - thanks for the comment - hugs - Joe
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Lovely poem this is about your house cat and mouser. I was wanting exotic or wild animals but this was a great poem none the less. Thank you for entering my contest. Good job.
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hi there
I should have submitted my poem - "The Sasquatch Lives" - you may like it - lol - you'll find it on my site - Bless God - Joe
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Quite a user-friendly verse pertaining to your household pet cat.
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Thanks Lyndon
Thanks for the comment and applause - well she is accually an outside cat - lol - so i'm stretching it a bit here - lol - Bless God - Joe - dobar dan ----------------------- peace
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Hah,
I thought you were talking about a woman! A great write. I loved the imagery and the word choice.
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Hah ----I was thinking woman - lol
Else this poem would have been to come up for an barn cat - lol - Misha means mouseing kinda in Croatian - Ona mis'a - (she's mouseing )--------------- thanx for the clappie (just one) lol lol lol - thanx much for the compliment - Joe - PE ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ cheers
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So this is your cat Misha......mmmmmmm she sounds like a lovely kitty that adores her master....I bet she is spoiled also.....LOL...ML
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I like the edit.. nice!
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Wow.. I am blown away on this one. I thought for sure you were talking about a woman, lol. Intense wording.. I love it!! Thank you for sharing this piece with us. I am so glad I read it. The flow was great and fairly well controlled, I would like to see what other twists you have written.. lol.
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I Edited Misha A Little
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Ha Ha - I thought people would
But then again I wrote it that way - thank you for the applause/rewards - I have a few twisters on here - buy wont give you the addy - lol - hunt them down yourselves - lol - Bless God - Joe - hugs
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Awww...such a sweet poem about your cat. And Misha is a cool name too! Pam
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Awwwww Thank You Pam
Misha ( Mis'a ) is a Croation name - it mean "she is mousing" - lol - thanks for the applause Pam - when are you posting a new poem? - take care - Joe --------------------- hugs
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So sweet babe. I miss my kitty...
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Write poem About Her Rickie
It's a contest - you can do it - thanks for the applause - Blessings - Joe - hugs --------------------------------------------------------- make peace not war ----------------- peace
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