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cycle of hate

so much anger
bright and burning
full and sharp

every chin turns
down and away
no help is held in any eye

deeply undesired pain
a blade
slicing up from down within

to recreate
the pain
thats been held


there's no forgiveness or letting go
and so to anger
your pain goes

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