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By a Dreamer

Who are you
lady of my dreams?
Are you from my past
or from my future?
A memory from long ago
or an omen of what is to come?
So as I lay here
and close my eyes,
I make a promise.
A promise to search for you,
no matter where you are.
And as I fall asleep
I begin to wonder,
will I see you again
in our secret fantasy.
For i wish to ask
for a name,
a number,
anything that i may put
with that beautiful face
that haunts my dreams,
and start my search
for the other half
of my torn soul.
My precious soul mate
who was destined by god,
raised by a mother,
and searched for
by a dreamer.

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  • Sarin Rayne
    June 16
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    This is such a beautiful poem.It is so full of love and I really enjoyed reading it.

  • Beautiful & Haunting

    Some things have a way of coming together if only in our dreams. May all your dreams come true I like this one.


  • Danzy007
    April 22
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    this is a little like one of my latest poems, only i've found my soul mate i no longer search but still, it had an even flow even if the paragraph was long it didn't matter once you started it just kept leading right on through

    well done bro


  • Zeprina-Jaz
    April 11

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    I know exactly how you feel. And the best thing is never ever to give up. Just keep searching for her. (btw, if you sleep with a bay leaf under your pillow, you will dream of your soulmate.)

  • Sophie 1
    March 14

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    Quite well done, and never give up, no matter how long it takes. Believe me, settling will only give you heartache.


  • estbelle gold member
    March 14

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    for a self-confessed dreamer like me this certainly made me smile

    lovely title and amazing flow of thoughts

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