Jasper sat there pondering, reminiscing, on his journeys to his love, his life. He could hear the deep breathing of his partner lying next to him. He couldn't lie down to relax. He got up and wnadered to the door.
"I'm going out for a bit." Jasper said, mostly to himself.
"Alright," his partner grunted back.
Jasper looked at the clock not really caring for the time. Time doesn't reallly matter to you when you've been alive for over 500 years. The blinking 12:00 caught his eye though. Jasper walked out to the garage, quietly tip-toeing across Edward, Bella, and Rennesmes' room. He knew the newlyweds wouldn't be asleep, but Rennessme would be. He didn't have anywhere to go but didn't want to be in the house. He was going to go hunting, but instead sat in Carlisles car. Thinking... Thinking... Thinking...
Jasper fell deep in thought, nothing could bring him out of his stupor...
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His vision was fading in and out, and it was hard for him to hear. Someone kicked him.
"Hey, are you alright?" someone called out in the distance.
Through his blurred vision, he saw a young woman, of around twenty. She was peering at him, with what seemed to be a worried expression. She repeated herself but Jasper didn't hear her quite as clearly anymore. His vision finally faded and completley and knew of nothing that was going on.
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Jasper came back to the real world sometime later, not knowing where he was. There was a complete change of scenery though. Light was flooding through his eyelids and he was on a comfortable something. There were voices in the background, but he hadn't opened his eyes yet. Jasper decided to eavesdrop before announcing his return to conciousness.
"He'll be okay," Jasper heard someone say.
"Are you sure?" a familiar voice said, exsasperated.
"Yeah, how are you so sure?" another voice, a meaner voice, echoed.
"Will you two quit doubting him, I'm sure he knows what he's talking about," a deep voice grunted.
"You're right by saying that," another voice said.
Jasper's feet elevated slightly. Someone had gotten up from the place he was laying. So these people are really worriedJasper thought.
"You know how I'm so sure?" said the first voice.
"How?" the same familiar voice said.
"I can hear him." the man stated simply.
"Oh, thank goodness!" a new voice, a motherly, angelic voice sighed.
Jasper hadn't recalled saying anything aloud but the time was now or never. His eyes fluttered open and he sat up.
Author notes
I am a twilight freak. Get over it.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the twilight books or any of the characters. I don't want to rob Stephanie Meyer of anything. This is merley for my enjoyment.
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Comments
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Not bad for a first chapter setup. You used the pronoun 'he' a bit too much. Some of them you can get rid of altogether, without the sentences suffering at all. Otherwise, good job so far.


