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Small Miracle #1


Small Miracle #1



she wants to play
barks at me
jumping up
nips my walker
when I say "no"
she understands

then yesterday
we learned to play
together

I threw the stick
she brought to me
again, again
her quick response
became delight
her happiness
lightened up my day

Grandma Cougar

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  • raspberry Greeters member
    March 16

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    Welcome to Allpoetry..

    a very different poem here. A different take on the prompt But a nice work.. Do keep psoting more and have a good time writing!!