One year ago I was outside playing with my dog when all in a sudden it started raining lightning and thunder. I I left my keys in my room. I tried to open the door, but the door was locked. We were locked out in the rain.
My puppy started crying very loudly and I ran to him and slipped and fell in a puddle of mud. We were all soaked.
One hour later we were laying in the mud all asleep . The rain started pouring down harder and harder. I got up and went to my garden and tried to seek refuge under my elephant ear plant.
Trust me, it didn't do me any good. I cried out: "God, please help me."
Then I tried to go into my dog's house.
And trust me, that didn't work either.
My dog suddenly started digging a whole. I got up to see what he was digging.
My eyes widened. It was my house keys. I knew I didn't leave it in my room. I jumped for joy, opened the door in a hurry, and let my pets in also. I ran and took a hot bath, because the rain was cold. Next, I washed my dogs. We all ate a snack and then...
It was The End!
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Cool!
A very adventurous story! A lovely dog i bet! Good luck to you!
Lana
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Awww. That's a feel good story. I like stories like that that end well sometimes. Good job! And Good luck!
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i'm guessing this is the one you wrote when you were ten?
i love it!! it's so nice and lighthearted. i really liked the ending:
"It was The End!"
nice write
=)
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good job! great story, i love how your dog dug it up, awesome job!
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