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I know a place...

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i.

There is a place,
where the river of loves
foundation...
is solid.

Here, an eternity has
already been
etched in stone.

ii.

I know a place,
at the rivers' edge,
where my heart rests
in a puddle...

only inches aways
from a powerful fall,
rapidly moving,
one way.

Where one slip
could change
my destiny
for all time.

iii.

There is this place,
where my heart rests.
A place,
I would like to show you.

Will you come along?
And if I slip,
or start to 'fall',
Will you catch me?

iv.

I know this place,
wonderous,
and magical.
Where my heart waits...

For you




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  • zappa gold member
    August 17

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    It's beautiful. I felt this way once, a long time ago. beautiful and horrible memories, but no regrets. I love the photo!


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    March 20
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    Beautiful, very serene with a touch of sensuality.

    All the best,
    mj.


  • geckogirl silver member
    March 14
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    thanks for your entry.