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[ shann you are my star, ]

shann you are my star,
the brightest in the sky
shann you are my love
the beauty in your eyes
shann you are my hope
which upon you i rely
shann you are my trust
yu never ever lie
shann your forever mine
as i'm forever yours
=]

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  • Times Change
    October 26, 2009
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    Awwe its so sweet. :]


  • Bright Lights
    July 12, 2009
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    Soo cute.
    Nice write.


  • Horcrux.Breathing
    June 5, 2009
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    ooh I like it its very sweet I like all the loyal stuffs x hehe


  • Deaths Servant
    April 28, 2009
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    Aww...Awsome dude....


  • leftdying
    April 20, 2009
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    awe

    how sweet, you have a beautiful write here. It has been a long time since I heard from you maybe if you get this you will write back. Well I hope. XD XD I will meet you on the mashmallow mountain and take all your candy canes. XD XD
    Hope you talk to me soon
    love,
    lysa Marye Spiess


  • xx-vampire-bites-xx
    April 4, 2009
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    awee

    Awwwwwe that's soo cute n i repeat Awwwwwe

  • Tonya L Turner
    March 29, 2009
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    very sweet!

  • Allycat897
    March 26, 2009
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    This is really good!!! i like it keep writing!!!!=]


  • MartaJay
    March 20, 2009
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    this is amazing. shes a lucky girl. =]


  • simplefarmgirl
    March 20, 2009
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    okay, I think you've forever altered the way I feel about the nickname shann. I kid you not. Some people end up calling me Shan, which is how I've always envisioned it spelled. Shan's always kinda bothered me because it looks...well...gross. But I love SHANN!! ahhhh!

    You've changed the way I feel about my nickname.

    Wow.

    Major kudos, dude.



  • Simply.sundry
    March 19, 2009
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    Hey David.
    That was beautiful.
    I am so glad you are happy =].
    Peace.
    Stay beautiful.
    Love,Sundry <3


  • XScreamMeALoveSongx
    March 16, 2009
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    awww, this is a sweet poem. :] <3


  • HatedLoveDieingRose
    March 16, 2009

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    wow, wonderful poem! i enjoyed reading it, I can feel your emotion in this peace, It flows together very well. GOOD JOB!


  • Mentally Disturbed
    March 15, 2009
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    That is so sweet!!!!!!!


  • HeartbrokenVampire
    March 14, 2009
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    aaww! david's in luuurrrrve!!!
    aww! this is really sweet dave!!
    i applaud you!


  • Snap.Crackle.Pop
    March 14, 2009
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    awe,
    dave this is amazing,
    i love the rhyming!
    this is so sweet. (:

    annabanana.


  • XxemohatexX
    March 14, 2009

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    aww this is sweet i liek it alot you dotn post things often and i rleya love to read your work good job!


  • Winter Wolf gold member
    March 14, 2009

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    Awe, this is really beautiful. I love how you wrote this. I can tell you care so much about her. That's good that you found your shining angel or star. Whatever you want to call her but this is a very touching piece. So full of love and passion. It's very uplifting. I am glad you have someone to love you. great write I really enjoyed reading it. My favorite lines were the last 4. very powerful. Thanks for sharing.

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