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lv...Deeper Darkness

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In the darkness of our romantic cave

only viewing outside to see the light

so contented with each others bodies

we know our companionship is right

 

Both seek privacy away from suspicion

deeper we advance into our private cave

no one can know that we are the wiser

that you be my master and I your slave

 

Love will always exist silently between us

we sensually merge together into one part

our emotions seek darkness from friends

letting sexual desires rule our open heart

 

Our love is strong in physical nature

the satisfaction we feel is so sureal

being content to remain in deep darkness

and express to each other how we feel

 

In the darkness of our romantic cave

the candles flicker dimly with soft light

we entwine together in each others arms

making sweet love until morning light

 

 

 

 

 

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  • darell
    April 6

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    Soft and..

    passionate was this romantic poem.
    I love the images of intimacy and
    uninhibited desires fulfilled.
    It put pleasurable thoughts in my mind.
    Well done lady love


  • arafura gold member
    March 14
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    Sweet and gentle words that flow beautifully down the page. A pleasure to read.

  • SimplySonnets gold member
    March 14

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    Beautiful in the extreme of poetic power.

    Your words are enchanting, loved each and every one.

    In the darkness of our romantic cave

    only viewing outside to see the light

    so contented with each others bodies

    we know our companionship is right

    This first stanza holds the mystery of this magical very human yet personnal relationship with love.

    Our love is strong in physical nature

    the satisfaction we feel is so sureal

    being content to remain in deep darkness

    and express to each other how we feel

    My favourite stanza, but all are just fine, a beautiful canvas of love. thank you.

    Tiny problem missed s from sensually in L10?