Your lips upon mine
Your hot flesh beneath my palm
Inhibitions fade
My manhood throbbing
Aching to be inside you
Such fires that burn
So wet, I enter
Your hot breath upon my neck
We gasp as one voice
Thrusting, sating lust
Riding a storm of passion
We peak, entwined, spent
Author notes
An erotic Haiku chain...
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A contest entry
- Naughty Ku by Draig aine.
2250 points, ended March 22, 44 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ♥Sensual Fantasies (18+ :P)♥ by zee91190.
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Comments
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Very steamy and sensual.And I dont think its got anything to do with the background.
I like how you've used mainly imagery to set the lusty ambience. Good job with this
"Your lips upon mine
Your hot flesh beneath my palm
Inhibitions fade" so sensual it gave me butterflies
hehe
Thank you for sharing this with me.
All the best
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good work, well what can one say, there is nothing like a good ku to keep the spirit of love in the fc radio waves.



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Hot!! Love the pict to. Riding a storm of passion...
yumm

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From start to finish quite the erotic tale...naughty, naughty bro


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So deliciously naughty and
sweetly nice.
Great write
it is definitely grabbed my attention
Best of luck in the contest
Thanks for sharing

~Pastel


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lovely indeed!!!! And the poem's nice too!
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lovely
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