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Naughty Ku Chain...

Your lips upon mine
Your hot flesh beneath my palm
Inhibitions fade

My manhood throbbing
Aching to be inside you
Such fires that burn

So wet, I enter
Your hot breath upon my neck
We gasp as one voice

Thrusting, sating lust
Riding a storm of passion
We peak, entwined, spent


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  • zee91190
    November 4

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    Very steamy and sensual.And I dont think its got anything to do with the background. I like how you've used mainly imagery to set the lusty ambience. Good job with this
    "Your lips upon mine
    Your hot flesh beneath my palm
    Inhibitions fade" so sensual it gave me butterflies hehe
    Thank you for sharing this with me.

    All the best

  • good work, well what can one say, there is nothing like a good ku to keep the spirit of love in the fc radio waves.


  • darkyinsoul
    April 9
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    Hot!! Love the pict to. Riding a storm of passion...
    yumm


  • sunoir
    March 22

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    From start to finish quite the erotic tale...naughty, naughty bro


  • PastelMoons gold member
    March 17

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    So deliciously naughty and
    sweetly nice.
    Great write
    it is definitely grabbed my attention
    Best of luck in the contest
    Thanks for sharing

    ~Pastel

  • Bruce silver member
    March 14
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    lovely indeed!!!! And the poem's nice too!


  • Draig aine gold member
    March 14
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    lovely

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