My mind is swirling
don't know why
Hearing voices
coming around
lost my way
from here to there
My heart is broken
from friends alone
Why does the world
seem to be falling apart
it gets harder for me
to see you when
all this time you've been
tearing me inside
Maybe its me fault
for slipping away
Author notes
Written February 27th, 2004
A contest entry
- Slipping by someoneweknew.
300 points, ended April 17, 2004, 40 entries
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THIS IS COMPLETELY AND TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you have my best of luck in the contest hope you do well!!!!!!!
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Hey this is awesome..I love it and am speechless. Great write.
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It's so emotional. I hate it when the world you know starts to all slip away at once, but never blame yourself. Sometimes everything is rough..and i dunno..you just got to believe in yourself and what the future holds for you. Really good work. I like the way it's broken up..like almost into so many thoughts colliding together. again, awesome job!!
----BRNW----
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