She comes on the darkest nights
I can’t deny her even if I tried.
The sway of her body compels me forward,
there’s no fight in me, to see her I even lied.
My body hardens just by her scent;
From the memory, tingles go through my body.
It’s been too long without her touch,
her skin tasting of the sweetest of candy.
I stay up every night hoping she comes by.
To show me her sinful ways
of her magical mouth.
I want to weep when I catch her wicked gaze.
She can make the holiest of man
bow down at her feet and beg,
just for one more night
to be in between those legs.
She’s the only one
who could suck me dry
and still have me begging for more
but she’ll leave me high and dry wanting to cry.
That sweet, sweet heat that pulls me in,
could make any man go crazy.
She will work you with those hips,
use you so good your mind becomes hazy.
Her sex so alluring
that you would lie to your mother,
just to be in her bed
because this little devil can fuck like no other.
But in the end you’ll cry
to be back in her bosom.
She’ll suck you dry,
then walk away and leave you high,
you will morn and cry
and beg, to be between those thighs.
But she’ll just walk away,
never to come back
and she’ll leave you weak.
Then you’ll die, from the memory
of what you will never get again.
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wow...
that was amazin<3
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I enjoyed this one. I don't like vulgarity in a piece for the most part but in this case it suited quite well. congrats.
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Cool
I like the way you wrote this. Very erotic, but tastefully done. The flow and rythym are damn good throughout most of the poem. You did an excellent job capturing and conveying the desires felt. Bravo!
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I have never been a huge fan of using vulgarity in writes but if I have to be truthful it worked well in this one. There was an almost macabre sensuality that you had going here and I enjoyed it - thank you
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Fantastic work here.
I loved the dark tone used here. This was erotic but not straight in your face smut. Well done!
Overall, you took some good lyrics and turned your inspiration into a beautiful write here.
**Master Ktulu**
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