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[ For the first time I can no longer continue ]

For the first time I can no longer continue
I can no longer be me
How can someone take everything I had
my love
my praise
my glory
How can Iive on
when she has everything I had
I wasted seven hours for what?
To be crying in a mess
in a distress
I am the one you want to be with

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