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Before I Knew Your Name

 

 

 

 

Before our eyes met I knew you.
I knew this burning deep and true.
You were the touch under the moon,
The blossom that within me grew.

You sang my song in perfect tune.
The first night ended all to soon.
I knew it would, you were that kind.
A butterfly from her cocoon.

You, the star meant for me to find.
With you my heartaches left behind.
The rainbow at the end of rain.
The ones who's arms I am entwined.

You let me release all of my pain.
Made the insane into the sane.
We loved before I called your name.
With one kiss nothing is the same.

 

 

 





 

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  • rinzurajan
    March 14

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    WOWWWWWWWWWWW...THATS ALL I CAN SAY...ITS SO AMAZING AND FULL OF LOVE...THE RHYME IS PERFECT AS WELL...

    GOOD LUCK


  • geckogirl silver member
    March 14

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    awww I love your take on the prompt.. these words stand put over the rest.
    Before our eyes met I knew you.
    I knew this burning deep and true.
    You were the touch under the moon,
    The blossom that within me grew.