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Mumbo Jumbo crap

These feelings, and emotional thingies...
Yea there not gonna work for me.
It just don't make any sense,
So why bother, who cares how I really feel?

All this mushie gushie crap,!
I don't want it.
Get it away from me.

It just hurts people and thats all.
Well yea, your happy for about five minutes,
then they brake your heart and,
You hurt for years after.

Whats the point in getting caught up in all this messy business?
This Mumbo Jumbo Gumbo crap. Then what.
You want me to listen to your lies and give up the only thing that is mine to give?!!

No way get out of here. You are just like everyone else.
Don't call me text me, or love me ever again!

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HAHAHAHA I am sorry if you don't like this but once I started I couldn't stop...
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  • movedon
    March 24

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    LOVEEEEEEEEEE IT

    The title made me laugh hysterically, and I just had to read it. Which, is kinda ironic because you are the most romantically cheezy adorable guy i know..in a good way of course. hell hath no fury like an angry corey?

    love,
    mylee

  • Kari gold member
    March 14

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    it is very good but goes over the limit It was for 10-30 Words not Lines