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Fever

Lying in my bed wrapped in the sheets
My body temperature rising in heat
I break a sweat inside my cocoon made of blankets
I wish so much that this pain in my body would quit

Going through this alone is the worst thing
But everyone is too busy to see how this fever stings
Too busy with their break-ups and make-ups to see
How my soul is crumbling inside of me

This physical sickness is only a temporary affair
But it hurts to see that you still don't care
It's the sickness inside that's eating to my core
I'm not over what happened, every day is a war

Can't you see that I need my friends so much right now?
The way you brush me off is breaking your vow
That you'd always be there for me whenever I needed you
Now you stand there like you're blind to this flu

Author notes

This one is about how I'm going through a lot right now and I really need my friends but apparantly they're too busy with their own affairs which I totally understand but it would be nice to get even one text asking how I'm doing when I get sick

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  • Hate-And-Pain
    March 28

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    Wow, this is absolutely amazing.
    I love how it flows, and the way you used a Fever as a metaphor for your pain is brilliant. Great job


    • tortured-heart
      March 30
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      thank you! and it wasn't quite a metaphor...like i'm going through a lot but then i also got sick...
      peace, love, & cheese


  • simply-sara
    March 18

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    how are you doing darling? i hope you're ok
    xoxoxoxoxoxo
    Sara