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[ Please don't go I think I'm falling ]

Please don't go I think I'm falling
Falling right off of the edge
Into pure insanity
Into a life I will dread with out you
Please don't leave me standing here
I need you close to me and near
I love the smell of your smooth skin
I love how our kisses have a spark when they end
I need you now
I need you here
Come closer please
Don't disappear

You're all I need

You're all I want

You're everything

That means something

 

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  • Puppydog gold member
    June 13

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    SO FILLED WITH EMOTION!!!

    I truly believe we all need that one person who helps us when we are sad, lifts us up when we are down and simply loves us for who we are.


  • TRiPP13
    March 13

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    Madi Herre...

    Favorite lines:

    I need you now
    I need you here
    Come closer please
    Don't disappear

    The beginning makes the poem just a smitch choppy but other than that this is a very emotional and lovely write. I love the way you describe your need for this person.

    Well done Lex.


  • DeSiBoO14
    March 13

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    I LyK DiS aLOt!!My FaV LinEs R
    "I love the smell of your smooth skin
    I love how our kisses have a spark when they end"
    U sHoW Ur EmOtIoNs VeRy WeLL!!GrEat JoB!!cHeCk oUt My NeW POeM wEn U gOt TiMe!!