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I dream of you. (Adult)

Pubes freshly trimmed I step into the showers steaming stream,
hot and wet, you can bet, I wish that you were here.
Shampoo twice, rinse and repeat, my mind wanders to you,
of bubbles landing on your chest, nipples taught and erect.

Our soapy hands scrubbing, a prelude to loving,
right here under the man made rain.
Some might say that we're insane, naked so frequently,
we contribute to the others sensual delinquency.

A softly whispered kiss, a breathless sigh,
open willing thighs is all we need to please.
Cascading rivulets of water bathing us in bliss,
lingering kisses exciting, enticing much more foreplay.

Gone are all of the soap suds, long forgotten now,
down on your knees you drop, intent on one thing.
To bring excitement to a rushing, rising peak, don't speak,
and all of the pleasure to us both that it brings.

Fingers tangled in hair, I stare,
as your fingers slide between your legs,
I beg, for you to let me quickly ensue,
on pleasuring you, as you are doing to me.

Shower now forgotten, how rotten, stumbling to the sink,
I think, that is where I'll have you.
A frenzy of movement, a logistics improvement,
and you're open wide to me and a questing tongue.

This songs been sung, many times been done,
one of our favorite times to make passionate love.
Your treasure trove is leaking, neither speaking,
legs beginning to tremble and shake, I wake,

From my lonely showering dream.




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let's celebrate

Well, I stepped into the shower tonight and....

Love you Tory, thinking of you baby.

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  • PureRomance
    March 26
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    This poem is wow!!!! Not much more I can say. This is very enticing and I enjoyed this. I wished somethin' like this could happen to me lol. I've just not had that experience yet. lol. Keep up the excellent work and best of luck to you and your poem in the contests its in.


  • Maxboy gold member
    March 24

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    Very nice write, but damn don't you hate it when you wake up in the middle of a wonderful dream like that?

    Well Done...Best wishes in the contest


  • jul
    March 23
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    Breathless!!!is all i can say. Goodluck in the contest. Thank you for entering

  • Good lord.

    is all i can say.

    welp, a dream is what we make it, should of took it all the way...well shit you did call me during the shower didnt you???? hope your phones alright.


    Love you too

    Good luck

    Tory


  • Emmyb gold member
    March 14

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    endearing and sexual

    This is an imaginative and beautiful piece. i love the theme of the shower you have used. i could see myself there with you well done. thanks for entering. Emmyb


  • Raivyn
    March 13

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    Aw, Damn Wish It Was Real

    LOL! It that not always the case, you have a wonderful image and then you find it is a drea, -shakes fist- I love it... And the image was a very nice touch.


  • hisaddiction
    March 13
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    mhm..wow

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