All of the world, an illusion
Feelings run deep
transformed into a dream
Bed sheets soft as your skin,
soft clouds as pale
Night dark as your eyes,
day warm as your heart
You are a perfect work of art
and you are not here
A contest entry
- Show Don't Tell by Glenda L Hand.
700 points, ended March 15, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love how you juxtaposed the night dark highs with the day warm heart. It's very nice poem and i can relate to it a lot
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Thank you so much, Ilana!
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Very nice but a little telly
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Thanks, I enjoyed your contest =)
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oh I like this! Simple and direct, paints it well.
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Thank you! =)
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beautiful description and the ending truly tugs the heartstring
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Aw, thanks =)
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