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Crumpled

Words as if written on a page
lie crumpled on the mind’s floor,
they once were in kept in a file cabinet,
all in order and neatly arranged,
one thought and that perfect description
flew into your brain.

They now are out of reach
because a fog came over the head,
you can hear those sentences murmuring
songs you one wrote so easily,
are blank and silent sheets.

Once you strolled the muse’s library
grabbing any creation with such ease,
fingers her telegram to pen that magic
obeying every touch felt.

It is all a void, a vast emptiness
slipping second by second
farther into a deep hollow place,
eyes keep wandering that virgin paper
or the word processor page,
waiting for the gate to open
and let the flood spill gushers of ink.

Sitting back when nothing happens,
exhaling and trying not to panic,
because can’t bear the thought
of this stealth imagination becoming a habit.

Author notes

"The hardest challenge is a blank page."

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  • Truetome
    March 21

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    very well written and 'gain I enjoyed the simplicity of the vocabulary and how these thoughts are shared. Gives us just what we need to hear. smiles. L,


  • Desdmona
    March 16

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    Wow. Great diction! The first stanza is wonderful, relating the mind to the room and the last line to very powerful. Nicely done. Good job and good luck. ~Des


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    March 14

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    Oh good lord I know this like the back of my hand. When the muse departs for leave without so much as a word but we must not panic because they always find their ways back when they run out of money Best to you in the contest

  • Oh wow I so can relate to this and know what you mean!
    Just fabulous!
    Best wishes with this.
    Gaylene


  • StarEyes
    March 13

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    WOW!!! What a great take on the prompt! I love this bubs!!! And you know, it is a fact!!! As I am sure you know!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • maralisa silver member
    March 13
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    a fantastic take on the promt good luck in the contestsis

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