Every other Saturday...
I sit alone in the dark,
on my bed of scarlet satin,
waiting for the show to start.
I look out my window
anticipating her arrival.
Yet, she does not know.
When her light comes on,
we begin to undress.
She turns to her lover,
I wish it was me.
Gentle touches, soft kisses,
my hands wander slow.
Her hands caress smooth skin,
while locked in sins embrace.
I watch on as she traces
her spine with her finger.
Upon my own hard nipples
my hands slowly linger.
Every other Saturday...
As the two lovers continue,
their affair, my hands,
graze lower between my legs.
Pressed back against the window,
my hand pressed firmly
to my wet mound.
She kisses down her stomach,
licking, tongue trailing between folds.
My fingers pushed inside
rubbing my wet clit.
This fetish makes me feel,
....."oh so whorish!"
My head tilted back,
orgasm starts to flare.
Her lover winks at me and
the vermilion blinds are closed.
Something tells me,
I think she knows.
Author notes
I tried to keep this sensual and hope it maintained it's erotic tone at the same time.
I tried to incorporate both meanings of the word scarlet here;
NOUN
1. very bright red with a slightly orange tinge
2. cloth or clothing of this color
Etymology: ME, aphetic < OFr escarlate < ML scarlatum < Pers säqirlāt, dress dyed crimson < ?
ADJECTIVE
1. of this color
2. of sin; sinful; specif., whorish
The picture I used I found on google.com Not quite sure who the artist is
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Comments
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*nods*
yes, this is delectable, delicately balanced between erotic and sensual. I could see this all unfold in my mind, and can honestly say it was a rush-that ending...beautiful.
Now I can call you Master
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and I will let your mistress know, you've done a fantastic job with this prompt, even if you wrote it months before I posted.
Yum, thank you.
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well, thank you very much. I am glad that you enjoyed this one.
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Oooooh, love it! Especially at the end. Very sexy.
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A very good exploration of one of the World's favourite spectator sports, I'm not a fan of centre aligned poetry but not too distracting here. The prompt subtly woven in which is good. Very good piece thank you for your support in our series.
the D O M
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Voyeurism (sp?) is a delectable sport. It allows the imagination to dance with temptation and possiblity with only a light risk. You catch the sensuality nicely, giving the feeling to the reader of being a voyeur as well and caught watching unable to break the spell.
Peace,
Tom B.
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Thank you very much. So glad that you were able to feel that and know exactly what this was about.
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Well this came out rather well i do belive. . I love it. Good luck with this round of the challenge.
Love you
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very good loved the addition of the wink
very sensual and superbly smooth, Lobo
Roses to you
Teresa
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