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lv...A Shadow In Your Night

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Darlin' I am a shadow in your night

always I will be there for you

we promised that in our pact

when we knew our love was true

 

Feeling you near me all the day

no matter what I choose to do

I feel your breath upon my neck

so warm and comforting too

 

The fire and ice that easily explains

the distance across the big pond

our minds share the same wave length

that creates that special bond

 

When I choose the day to visit you

I expect to have that special treat

you promised me when we made love

it was something good and sweet

 

 

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  • Gwenevere
    March 15

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    Distance is no barrier where true love is concerned.You have written a heart felt poem that reaches across the miles to your loved one, Ros

  • Papagallo
    March 14

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    This is a love poem that touches both heart and soul. This is a poem written for someone special. Thanks for sharing your words with us.

  • Trulely a warm story belongs to the heart and to the soulful moments of the life..well done indeed...thanks for sharing..


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 14

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    This is nice and I feel it has far deeper meaning than just poets imagination? A lovely thought put into words. Sheila


  • arafura gold member
    March 13
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    Beautifully expressed.


  • sense surreal
    March 13

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    a beautiful shadow, that is...
    I love the sensuality in this,

    our minds share the same wave length
    that creates that special bond

    I love this part a lot

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