You brush my lips and sweep me off my feet.
And the limelight pours onto my face, like looking into a sky of summer rain.
My heart leaps out of it's cage and flies through my throat, through my mouth, through my lips, as some deranged bird searching for it's nest.
It's home.
I'm left floating, facing a darkened crowd.
And I seek you out.
Playful butterflies of spring fill my body as an explosion of restlessness erupts from my skin. Makes me glow.
Makes me feel.
Feel.
Words of a sonet etched on your fingers sink through my neck when you pull me close.
Passion.
Animal.
'Til we're left.
Left breathing on our lips.
Mischievous fingers tease my hair and cute blue eyes do more than see.
Peer into my soul.
My mind.
Discover my darkest secrets and understand my childhood, at least.
Our lips touch and the adventure begins again.
Because, baby, I don't believe in angels, but when i'm with you it's heavenly.
Author notes
The return of Second.Choice, I haven't wrote in what feels like years due to the mental block I went through when I broke up with my boyfriend. Luckily we're back together though. 
Anyway, I know it's not very good, but I was just jotting a few lines down and strung them together. I hope it's not that terrible that it makes your computer crash or anything, if you're reading this, thankyou for visiting!
Oh, and, before I do get any angry notes about my proposterous layout, it's because I was writing it as how I wanted it to be said. Quiet alot of pauses in it to represent like a feeling of breathlessness. Hope that clears some things up. <3
I just want to thank everyone for suggesting titles Thankyou for even visiting gosh! 
Thankyou for all your lovely comments.
++ Much Love,
Second.Choice
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Constructive Critisism! I don't like it! Help me improve!
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"as some deranged bird searching for it's nest." I wasn't fond of this line until I read the rest of your poem; now I understand the reference. What I don't understand is why you are being so hard on yourself? This was a beautiful poem. As far as titles, well, sometimes something leaves you speachless and maybe a title is unnecessary. This was beautiful. It definately did not make my computer crash.
***Rae***
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Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you like it! & I guess it's because I haven't wrote a poem since like September or something.. Mental Block >_< .. Lol, anyway, thankyou veryy much
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how could you not tell me about this ?!
sillllly girl!
its absolutely stunning.
im glad you found a winner (:
our kiss
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heavenly
would be titles i'd choose i think.. but than again. its hard to think of something that would sum this up.
you've got a gift lovee. x
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Awweeeee thankyou hun
It's not that good :/
Love you lots <3
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very good poem. a title i would suggest is "The breath of an angel" or if it has to be one on your list " when we kiss" either way keep up the good work.
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"'Til we're left.
Left breathing on our lips. "
This stood out to me, then I saw you wanted to invoke a feeling of breathlessness. My suggestion would be "angel's breath".
very good write
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