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teardrops falling like everlasting waterfalls

The thought comes to mind,
Makes me so tried,
When will it ever stop,
flowing down my face,
never knowing when it will stop,
trying to not to think about it,
but your face comes to my mind,
I am in love with you can't you see,
that my world is nothing if your not in it,
why is it me,
water coming down like a faucet,
can you wipe it up with a mop,
and ring it out in a cup,
or do I have to drown in my own tears for you to see,
that you are the one for me,
or do I just die in a lonely world,
where no one knows that its over,
not for them,
but for me,
that the everlasting waterfall has took my life.

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  • oh my god i am always here for you i shall never hurt you i want you to always remember that cause i have been hurt i know what not to do and i will try to make you smile everyday

  • baby-s-man
    March 15

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    love the way this ends.Great write and I will write as it relates to me in my next piece,ty 4 da muse affect