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Unrequited love

Unrequited love,
doesn't that sound so damn cliche?

But when you're walking down the school halls,
and glance back behind you,
only to see HIM kissing some other girl,
your heart starts to break,
just that little bit more.

You know you like him,
and you know he doesn't like you,
but you still can't stop dreaming about the day,
when he asks you to the dance,
and you fall in love with him on the dance floor.

Seems just like some other crush huh?
But you're convinced its different,
you can't get him out of your head.

But hunny, just take a deep breath in,
its unrequited love,
just deal with that.

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  • but ain't it so damn awsome when the girl is chaught kissing you the next day! lol beautiful my love!


  • stepbystep
    March 13
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    oh! i forgot, claps!


  • stepbystep
    March 13
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    holy moley,

    i kinda knew how you feel.
    man o man, but i could never WRITE it like this.
    amazing


  • BrokenSanity
    March 13
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    Ah... Okay. This is... an interesting poem. Not from truth, I hope?? Well written and good luck.