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Blessed Be!

The moon shines so bright
As the girl raises her arms.
Pure radiance shines in her eyes
As she feels the wind on her face.

She dances around the circle
Feeling centuries of ancient power
Flow through her.

Flames dance as she passes them
On her graceful dance.
Water vibrates to her feet
As she dances.

The wind dances with her
The ancients dance with her
As the earth provides the song.

She is filled with love and wonder
As she feels The Goddess descend
Into her.

She continues this dance for hours,
finally stopping abruptly to say
"Blessed Be."

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  • Jessipotts
    November 10
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    love it, the images created were so vivid to me. As a pagan myself this poem speaks out to me. Thankyou for sharing. Blessed Be x

  • judmc
    May 27

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    Nice poem

    Some imaginative and meaningful imagery about the girl with magical powers nice to read...George...


  • pixiestix gold member
    April 15

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    I love the imagry of the dancing girl becoming one with all that surrounds her through dance.

    Enchanted enjoyable write. Thanks for entering


  • Antipodi
    April 13

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    Wow such beautiful imagery you created my enchanted friend ..your poem is wonderful ..maybe you should enter it in our competition only 2 days left

    • hotgurl
      April 13
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      I already added one to your contest, but I could remove that one and add this one instead.


  • The FaeQueen
    April 8
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    Enchanting!
    I love the imagery in the poem.

  • Bob Fox
    March 21
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    And

    Perhaps the ancient gods, the Anunnaki, smile at your words poet.

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