The moon shines so bright
As the girl raises her arms.
Pure radiance shines in her eyes
As she feels the wind on her face.
She dances around the circle
Feeling centuries of ancient power
Flow through her.
Flames dance as she passes them
On her graceful dance.
Water vibrates to her feet
As she dances.
The wind dances with her
The ancients dance with her
As the earth provides the song.
She is filled with love and wonder
As she feels The Goddess descend
Into her.
She continues this dance for hours,
finally stopping abruptly to say
"Blessed Be."
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A contest entry
- Fae Folk Gone Wild - PIF - Members of Enchanted Realm by pixiestix.
2000 points, ended April 16, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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love it, the images created were so vivid to me. As a pagan myself this poem speaks out to me. Thankyou for sharing. Blessed Be x
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Nice poem
Some imaginative and meaningful imagery about the girl with magical powers nice to read...George...

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I love the imagry of the dancing girl becoming one with all that surrounds her through dance.
Enchanted enjoyable write. Thanks for entering


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Wow such beautiful imagery you created my enchanted friend ..your poem is wonderful ..maybe you should enter it in our competition only 2 days left


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I already added one to your contest, but I could remove that one and add this one instead.
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Enchanting!
I love the imagery in the poem. -
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Perhaps the ancient gods, the Anunnaki, smile at your words poet.
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