the moon glowing
with brilliance
in the most perfect
blue of skies
a dimple accent
twinkling to the left
a perfect display
of His art
effortless ambiance
breathtaking gorgeous
realizing the beauty
of space, depth & relationship
drawing us closer...
enticed by the design,
perfection molded
crafted, by His hand
to our heart
with love
always
and forever
timeless
and
without
boundaries.
Author notes
look at the moon... breath it in...
inspired by the moon tonight full and bright with a dimple of a star to the left.
Please tell me what you think or not?
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Absolutely beautifully penned. This leaves me feeling serene and content. Not an easy feat to do lately. I love the imgery and whole feel of the write in general
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Excellent
This is really good!! Excellent as a matter of fact. Beautiful metaphor and even better after reading your comment. Great write!!!
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Sometimes, a moment calls forth the Muse. We feel compelled to capture and celebrate our joy in it. You snapshot how a moment can ensnare the heart and mind....humble us and make us feel connected to Something Greater, all at the same time. Very nicely done!
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Ah ...
How beautiful a visual poem of peace and adoration! I love moonlit memories of the Omnipresent Craftsman of Love. Wondrous picture of the face of the universe.
Thank you for sharing your softness and contentedness in poetic splendour.
Be well, Precious.
Myra
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a dimple accent, a good phraseology that, the moon has wept all night here, it's been chucking it down lol a good poem.
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The moon is always an inspiration for me as well. Sometimes it feels like magic. This was beautifully written. It makes me want to fall in love all over again. Perfect.
becca
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ah the moon, aye, it is a great thing to behold, we had a full moon recently, lear crisp skies and bright light. aye i am back
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