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better than you

you deserve better
good bye
"...better than what?"
me
"better than love?
what the hell out there do you suppose is better than love?"

well darling
i've finally found it
something better than love
i found the thing you set me free for
...now i'm a whore
for better
for worse
with sickness
or in health
as long as i live

honesty
trust
sex
peace
shadows
kisses
cookies

better than you...
                      apparently

thank yous i suppose are in order

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  • *hug*

    I do hate that line, quite a bit... I love the words and the work, good job


  • doodlelucky13
    March 15

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    lol well as i've said before, guys are stupid, sadly the stupid ones always seem to be easier to choose lol


  • doodlelucky13
    March 13
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    do he know how u feel? it may make him think <3

    • KittyAnne
      March 13
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      hahahaa no... i was talking to one of my friends about why griff and i broke up and it was b/c he "thought i deserved better" ...so i decided to write a poem while my writers block was still gone

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