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Oreo

her colors are simple
and yet full of life
she accepts the world
although she can never be a wife

but she is there to listen
when times get tough
she is there to hold you
when things are rough

she asks nothing in return
except for your love
everything about her
fits like a glove

she is one and only
truley yous to keep
she watches out for you like a angel
when you sleep

she is my baby girl
and soon she will be a mother
and she only needs me
her one and only lover

her name is Oreo
soft to the touch
i don't think i could ever love
anyone this much

Author notes

this is for my holstien cow. She is due in May and I love her to death. She is my world

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  • teardrop gold member
    March 15

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    I love this! As I was ready it, several scenarios came to mind. At first, I thought it was about another woman, then reading further, a mother writing about her child. Then I read your comments. I love It!!

  • That's a nice write. I came in contact with some cows when I was younger and never really liked them much. But this is enough to give them another chance. You certainly seem to love Oreo a lot.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 13

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    Beautiful write

    Oh we do love our animals and see in their eyes how they love us as well . I hope she has an easy birth and the calf will be awesome indeed