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In Her House

She:

    In my room I think
    How I wish she was here
    I really need some help
    I pick up the phone and call her up
    "Let's have some fun!"

Me:

    "Oh, how thrilled I am!
    My blossoming, grassy meadow
    gets shower of lust and pleasure
    Oh, What's in store for me?
    Lots of fun it must be
    I'd like you to caress my silken limbs, my dear!
    Would you like to touch my unripe pears?
    What should I wear....
    Perhaps a see-through dress?"
   

Author notes

This erotica is being written in collaboration with my lovely friend Devilwithahalo: . Please, wait till it's completed. (unfortunately, the poem remained incomplete as my collaborator got too busy.)

CAN SOME OTHER SWEET LADY HELP ME COMPLETE IT?

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  • daffodilblossom
    November 8
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    would you like to touch my unripe pears... i luv this great image mmmmm


    • Ms Lez
      November 8
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      daffodilblossom

      You chose my best part. Thank you, lady!


  • Dead End
    June 27

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    Very Erotic Indeed

    Lol.
    "I'd like you to caress my silken limbs"
    Is the best line of this.
    it's Sensual but oh so naughty.


  • awannabepoet
    May 6
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    Oh my this is very erotic indeed.

    Love the write and it is passionate that is for sure.


  • Purple Orchid
    March 13
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    sounds sexy. i will love watching this

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