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Beach forgotten

Sands Shift as winds twist dunes into an unknown labyrinth.
what beauty is there in things that never change?
                                          Life      Goes      On
                                              spiraling outward
                                                              never
                                                                      repeating
                                                                              yet...
                                                                                    coming         
                                                                                                  so  close
       

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