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Whiskey and Other Spirits.

Why hold back? You know you want me,
How about unleashing me from my glass cage?
I know you can’t resist for very much longer,
So why sit there feeling longing and rage?
Knowing I will take away the pain you feel,
Especially if you drink lots of me neat,
You’ve answered my call; you’re on your feet!

Another bottle will make it even better,
Next drink will be the ultimate one,
Do you know that you’re in my power?

Oh my friend you are such fun!
Time is becoming a little shorter,
Hospital may be your next port of call,
Everyone knows that you’re addicted,
Really you’re fooling no-one at all!

Suppose you take me from the cupboard,
Pour me aggressively down the kitchen sink,
I know you’re not capable of lasting long,
Reality’s unbearable without that drink.
I am stronger than you’ll ever be,
Torment is yours without me there,
Show me now how much you care!


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