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My Apology To The Prostitute

I stared at you long enough to let our eyes meet
and wondered at your heels on that icy street.
Wondered at services you had already rendered,
either for gain or gratuitously tendered.

Wondered if your payscale is based on fantasy and fetishes
or is it simply a spreadsheet of hourly wishes.
And as I almost bent down, my first stone to pick,
I got a call from a client who makes me quite sick.

Then I started to remember times when I dressed to please;
and even more times when I laughed with too much ease.
As I started to tally my payscale and score,
I had to humbly admit that you're probably worth more.

Slowly, but surely, I started to realize
that, quite often indeed, I serve those that I despise.
If to prostitute is to put to base use for gain,
then I, amongst most, should be first to earn disdain.

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Prompt #3: A story... hate to admit it, but this one's true.

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  • The title and the last stanza is superb.Worth reading time and again.


  • Heva Feva
    June 5
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    Good luck and thanks for entering my contest.
    -heva


  • Kathraina gold member
    May 15

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    Wow, fantastic job with this piece!
    It says so much in so little. This speaks volumes about society and the prejudices held against those who sell themselves when we do that so very often too. Marvelous job!
    Bravo


    ♥ Kate


  • Emmyb gold member
    May 12
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    this is excellent. very well written.

  • Very interesting composition--Quite unique!
    Very creative and thought provoking!
    I suppose we all prostitute ourselves in one way or another!
    Well done & best of luck in the contest!


  • shelbymarie
    March 17
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    It was an enjoyable read. Thank you for entering.

  • Keen unjudgemental insight

    R esponsive take on social ills
    O ffered here when overkills
    S eem so facile when judgemental
    H eartless proffer detrimental
    N onsense. Those ground by life's mills,
    I nnocents swallow bitter pills,
    D eprived of rights most fundamental.

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