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Angel

Tell me how much did it hurt?
When you fell from above.
God's gorgeous blonde angel
Sent down for her love.

When I dream of you and I
God's chorus sweetly sings.
Then thoughts come by, like
Where do you hide your wings.

By talking with you I feel, now
I know this may be strange,
But I feel that I've known you forever.
I pray these things never change.

I need to tell you this because
I can't hold these feelings within.
To hear your voice on the phone
Sounds like a sweet violin.

I want to spend more time with you.
Give up my weekends for us.
I'll never stray away,
In this you can trust.

I wish words could tell
How much I care for you.
When I see you, I'll know what to say,
I'll know just what to do...

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Written February 27th, 2004

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