It's love that is spitted on ground
it's hate that is people's virue
It is sugar tasing like salt
It is mind that's turned upside down
It looks like DOG but I read it God
You may run but I have to stay
I am treated a Ghost but You are scarry
You are a baloon and I blow it...............
Hear the BANG......
But I am still ALIVE
You weep..................I laugh
You weak..................I stronf
You sea........................I swim
You kill........................I save
You destroy.....................I communicate through yelloe jounralism
I AM STILL FINE...........................RELAXED............................BREATHING.................AM HUMAN........................NOT INSANE that you want me to be
you fell it or not.............do inform
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as this contest is calling for a letter to the alcoholic or addict in your life, not a write about them, i am asking you to reenter with a letter. viyanna rosemarie
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There is some strong emotion in this, the spelling mistakes are a little off-putting but do not detract from your overall message. I found myself feeling you may be caught in the spiral of addiction with the person to whom you address, either as a fellow addict or as someone who feels powerless. I wish you luck in the contest.
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It's love that is spitted on ground
would spat be better here?
it's hate that is people's virue
do you mean virtue?
thank you for this entry and i wish you the best of luck in this contest. viyanna rosemarie
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