push, push
past the pain
beyond the caring
beyond the sharing
i can not smile
and will not cry
so only one of us
will be satisfied
it won't be you
Author notes
~woof~
A contest entry
- Quickie - 50 words or less x10 poets reserve by Cannonsfire.
1050 points, ended March 12, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This reminds me of something and I can't bring it to mind... grrrr...
Ezra Pound maybe. How apt...
This is a beautiful little piece, your words like bits of sparks on this first night of summer.
Fresh creation unexpectedly undreamed of that which overshadows and all ll I have ever said... I know about betrayal.
Bravo.
~ Fox
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Clever and created, thank you for the entry C
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