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Sting

Staring at your green glasses
I freeze

Trying your leaping frogs
I sneeze

Happy that you’re here
I fly

Taking you with me
I kiss the sky

Flapping my random wings
I leer

Expecting your private space
Loud and clear

Author notes

Stupid poem
im just trying out a new style
lol

I've never written a poem like this, but it's worth a try

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