'Tell me how you feel' she said, hoping for what she wants to hear
But after a few words were spoken she knew his feelings were clear
But in his heart he loved her, but his mind didn't want to say
So instead he crushed her world, and now she does not live to see today
He didn't think before he spoke, because he was too scared
and now he will never get the chance to show how much he cared
Instead he'll have to live a life of sorrow and regret
Another day, another sunrise followed by another sunset
But unfortunately he couldn't give her what she did seek
Another lesson learned in life, you need to think before you speak.
Author notes
This is the worst thing I've ever written. >.<
I'm sorry for this crap
A contest entry
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Comments
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this is so true!!!!
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i get this too...
i hate how well i know your mind...
talkative?
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This is bollocks, it makes me angry >.<
Write more plesh?
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This isn't another crap poem sweetie its another one of those poems that really strikes into my heart. Sometimes I wonder if I left if Rob would even give a damn.
You could've made this longer though Dammit! I love you rhyming dear I'm glad you're back into it
xoxoxoxox
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Not crap at all, friend.
The only line I couldn't make fit was 'Another day, another sunrise followed by another sunset'. Other than that, very good. I looked at it, and could see that it rhymed, and I thought the lines were too long to work, but it did work. Good job!
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Are you mad? This is bollocks, it doesn't even make sense! I don't know what the hell I was thinking when I wrote it. =/
Thanks for the comment anyway.
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I'm not mad, actually, no
It makes good sense. Cna make any sense I want it to. So be quiet, crabby boo boo! -
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crabby boo boo?!
That sounds mean.
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Well it certainly is not mean!
At least I hope it's not. In case, though, you shall be promoted, for now, to Niggy Noo Noo, which, by the way, if just darn lovely. -
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Lol, sounds lovely.
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prompt is up
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