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Love Descrimination



Love Discrimination


Partial to wealth
Partial to health
Partial to skin color
Partial to hair length
Partial to height
Partial to weight
Partial to past
Partial to present
Partial to future
In search for the one -
your soul mate -
the perfect love?

Love discrimination!


January, 2003
Inga a/k/a PoetLady777

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Written February 27th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • BabieJuliet69
    March 15, 2004
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    Excellent write

    i agree with hiddentreasures ... a lot of people are very picky when it comes to love ... the only thing that should matter is the way the person treats you (for instance my boyfriend lostsoulz lol ... i love him to death but some days i have no clue how he deals with me) ... love is a weird thing and so much can be wrote about it ... but it was awesome and it really points out what people see love as when they are looking for it ... the person doesn't have to be perfect ... excellent penning and keep it up ... good luck in the contest

    ~~~ Babie ~~~


  • March 3, 2004
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    LOL, this is well written. I must say that it's funny because most of us are picky...Love discrimination! Although we all have our preferences. LOL, good job with this and keep writing!