There is a fire in me
It owns me
It controls me
Sometimes it burns in me
Tell me that life isn’t fair
And that I shouldn’t accept it
Sometimes it tells me
That fairytales are only fairytales
And burns my dreams into pieces
Sometimes I feel shy
Like a little snowman there's trying to be brave
But melts because the fire’s so hot
The fire is my passion
It might control me
But it also lights up my world
Author notes
For a picture contest: Pic Credit: http://www.creativemyk.com/gallery.aspx?id=2311
Hope you like it
A contest entry
- I Got That Fire!! by lowercase prelude.
600 points, ended March 13, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
elegant
in your introduction you say/ask about your english. it is very good in the most elegant way. your writing is very effective because your choice of words cuts right to the point. god, i wish i was bilingual. nice work, keep at it and please write a poem in your native language and post it.
-
very good
-
good take on the prompt
-
I feel the fire. I wish you the best in this contest.
Adding your comment:
