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You Seem So Real

I see you when I close my eyes,
You're close enough for me to touch.
I reach out through the tears to find you,
But you fade away and the pain is too much.

                                        You seem so real when you're standing there,
                                        And all becomes right with my world.
                                        You seem so real when you're standing there,
                                        And smiling down at your little girl.

I have moments of peace, I forget that you're gone,
And the crushing grip on my heart eases.
But then I open my eyes and cry right way,
The truth is you're gone and I'm falling to pieces.

                                        You seem so real when you're standing there,
                                        And all becomes right with my world.
                                        You seem so real when you're standing there,
                                        And smiling down at your little girl.

I see you when I close my eyes,
And "I love you" I hear you say.
Thank God for those bits of grace,
To get me through another day.

                                        You seem so real when you're standing there,
                                        And all becomes right with my world.
                                        You seem so real when you're standing there,
                                        And smiling down at your little girl.


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  • nice symetry throught beautiful write about sad subject sorry sbout your dad Keep writing it helps


  • Shuberth
    April 1

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    good

    yea this is beautiful loved this again, nice flow nice pattern and the way you put this into words very talented

    Shuberth

  • I love the refrain in this...you are a very talented writer, it flowed very nicely Bravo!


    • Selestial
      March 13
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      Thank you for your very kind words. I read some of the things here and I think I am way out of my league... *smiles*