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The Plot For My Revenge

You made me cry
and that was a mistake
now Ill take you heart
and make it break

Ill take your
mind, body, and soul
and make you fell
less than whole

Ill make you feel they way i feel 
the only difference is
the pain Ill put you threw
is going to be more than real

Ill make you regret
ever knowing me
Ill take all your pride
and Ill make you  flee

out of sight
out of mind
the only way
Ill be fine

is to make your life
worst than mine
the only way to do that
is to take your pride


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  • BAMFNx3
    March 12

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    Very good poem. I like that it wasn't a prewrite, which is excellent. A little vauge, but nevertheless still an awesome poem. Good luck and thanks for entering!

    <3Kate