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spilt milk.

I can't write

each word lacks lucidity,
I find myself flexing fingers,
asking adjectives to amplify,
make each syllable sacred, tears -
fragile face, hands cupping cheeks;

nothing comes, my eyes burst
and all I can do is shriek

into uncaring night.

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3.shriek


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  • A.E.Blackwell
    March 14

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    yes, you can write....everyone can write...good job with this...good luck in your contest...you'll find that you write more than most because most people hate to read and write...


  • SEA angel gold member
    March 13

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    Like a bee buzzing by suddenly...

    I saw "3 please" written with ease. No fees just threes. Gee! Free he said she said. Three for thee, me, we. No... for she. And behind a tree someone said, "Oh" and ran to p where nobody could see. P was waiting on Q's cue to go to the sea. Several men playing golf had their balls on golf course tees. I'll be!


  • heavenbird gold member
    March 12
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    oh, and please space out your username in your AN. :]


  • heavenbird gold member
    March 12
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    3 -

    shriek.