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christmas poem

when i finally came
to college, i thought to myself:
why here? why pages, paper
cuts, the sting of academia?

here, she said, here i stop for
you to finally begin.

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    March 16
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    Thank you for your entry in the contest. Good luck.